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For CPI Group Marketing. An organization promoting the use of manga style artwork in Australian marketing.

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:iconhikarininjax:
Nice picture, I like how the foreground is out of focus in order to concentrate more on the girl. The design of the girl is pretty good too, simple but effective. Her position is a little unnatural and the left arm is too short compared to the right one, I think you gotta check up on that. Another detail is that we don´t get to see where the thing she is holding finishes
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That's actually a very classic Japanese pose that I used a photo ref for. I didn't think about the arm length. It's actually an illusion. The arm is bent while the sleeve is stretched so, you're right, it does look as if the arm is out of proportion. I think I will cheat and pull it out further just to destroy the illusion.

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:iconviolet-shade:
I like how everything is brownish (lack of a better word :P) tones except for the blossoms and the green on the bow and branches, it really pops out :)

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:iconani-roma702:
Wow! that's so beautiful and I love her Kimono design and style.

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Thanks, I was hoping it would work that way.

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Thanks. That was from a photo of a girl in a kimono. I decided to later add the blossoms to reflect the ones in her kimono.

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:iconmongrelssister:
I love the depth of this one; with the cherry blossoms in the front, slightly blurred for camera focus; the subtle, soft creamed colors. And her innocent expression.

Very well done! :aww:

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Wow that's beautiful. They cherry blossoms have a somewhat creepy beauty to them, I love it. Amazingly well done. <3
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That's true, They create a kind of ominous shadow.

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